Flying Kites

We are learning to write to describe using activated nouns. 

The kite spun in the wind.

The wind blew loud in the air. 

The children ran around on the grass. 

The trees danced in the wind. 

The string wiggled. 

The grass waved in the wind.

The birds flew around us. 

By Megan. 

The kite swooped like a seagull dancing in the sky. 

The wind lifted the kites into the air.

The children ran down the hill happily. 

The trees swayed, swished and swooped. 

By Tai-Toniō

The kite dove towards the ground.

The wind rattled past.

The children laughed with joy. 

The trees blew sideways. 

The string pulled the kite up. 

The grass swished side to side. 

By Joshua

The kite flew in the thin air. 

The wind blew so hard that it took my kite straight up in the wind. 

The children screamed as they were running with their kites. 

The trees blew left and right as the wind blew the trees. 

The string fluttered on my kite as the kite fell down. 

By Neo

The kite swished in the air. 

The kite swooped in the air. 

The wind blows. 

The children fly their kites. 

The children ran down the hill with their kites. 

The trees swish while the children play. 

The string is playing tug of war with the kite. 

The grass waved while the kids run down the hill. 

By Mackenzie

The kite danced in the air. 

The wind thrust the kite up into the air. 

The children laughed, like a big crowd of laughing people. 

The trees waved their green leaves. 

The string tugged the kite. 

The grass flew and clung to people's shoes. 

By Charlotte.